Falling Into Love


My heart dances,
My body flies
My wings spread wide,
I glide
Over obstacle and misfortune
The horizon is in view.
Over the walls of insecurity
Past the white-tipped cliffs of misery
Away from a land of suffering
Into your arms, into your heart,
Into a forgiving brand new start.
I am gliding,
I am falling
Into love.
You are everything I dreamt of
In my shadowed state.
You tore prison bars away,
Shredded shackles, turned fear,
Burst into my fate
And you opened my eyes,
Opened my wings,
And took me in flight
To heaven above.
Now we are falling
Into love.

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About theonlyjoe

I am Joe. This is a collection of my ramblings, poems, stories, afflictions, victories, and the picture of my mind. Make yourselves at home. View all posts by theonlyjoe

2 responses to “Falling Into Love

  • mystifiedsoul

    This had a great flow. If you want criticism then, for me, the use of ‘gate’ imagery lessened the piece for me. It was almost as though it was there to rhyme. It may just be me though but that’s my honest opinion.

    Still, good read anyway!

    • theonlyjoe

      Thank you for it, actually I agree. I will probably spend most of today changing it hahaha, so you can check back later and see what you think πŸ˜› thank you πŸ™‚

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